山西省阳泉市第十五中学 高一(一)班 李紫印        指导教师 冯卫湘

    Times are changing day by day. Doing the shopping is easier. Most people are better-dressed and they enjoy modern life.
    Girls are changing, too.  There are many differences between the older and younger generations.
    I know a twelve-year-old girl, who, to my surprise, has little time to play. She told me that she dreamt of being a dancer, so she must learn to dance, play music and so on. Sometimes, she is out of breath under such pressure, but she can’t stop because modern life is busy.
    In addition, I find those girls know more and more. Although they are little girls, they know how to dress fashionably. Sometimes they look older than their age, though.
    As an older female, I realize that compared with the modern girls, my generation is less well-educated and takes part in fewer leisure activities. I realize that we don’t make full use of our time the way they do. Therefore, we should try our best to value our time and pursue our dreams.
    Confident, proud and energetic, modern girls represent new times.

教师点评:
    时代在变化，女孩也在变化。作者细心地观察到了比自己小的女孩们与她们之间的不同，感受到现代女孩的自信和充沛的精力，从中体会到自己努力的方向。本文简洁流畅，表述清楚。